Margaret Louise

@Frank, no it was not! But I'm definitely checking that out now! Thanks for the feedback, always greatly appreciated:)

Thanks for the suggestions, you have several good points. Soon I'll go back and polish it.

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It seems like every reviewer has asked the same question: why are they separating? It's funny, because I wrote this for a friend of mine, who split up with her ...

Thanks for the review! The man was fake; she imagined a prince on her lawn to distract her from her reality, which isn't sufficient to make her happy. When her ...

Oh I forgot! I loved the prologue poem.

Wow, thanks so much for all the positive feedback! It warmed my heart, really. You're right about the ending, the fact that she's building a lighthouse should be clearer. Gonna ...

Thanks for the feedback, guys. It means a ton. Anyway, there is sort of a story behind this poem. I wrote it for a friend of mine, and it's in ...

Aw this reminded me of my own father! He's awesome, but not that great with the big stuff. Luckily I'm old enough that I can pretty much do stuff on ...

Thank you so much! And yes, I am a devoted and slightly obsessed Muse fan. I'm glad to meet another one :)